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标题: 2013博奥学校第二批征文选登：手表的自述(作者黄婧文) [打印本页]

作者: 毛毛的夏天 时间: 2013-1-23 10:51
标题: 2013博奥学校第二批征文选登：手表的自述(作者黄婧文)

手表的自述

　　作者：黄婧文指导教师：贺天红

　　Hello!我是手表，我被小主人天天戴在手上，要知道，我不仅漂亮而且很实用，不信你看......
　　我一身粉红色外衣，时针、分针和秒针在我的脑袋上转来转去，上面印着一个米老鼠图案和一些小星星哦!怎么样?我漂亮吧?不过除了美丽我还很实用呢!
　　每天，我头上的时针、分针、秒针都能准确地告诉我时间，你可别小瞧我!小主人每天干任何事都需要我!例如：写作业、运动、玩耍......虽然我只是一些零件组成的，但你也见证到了我的用处吧!
　　我跟随小主人已经有整整五年，她对我很好，每天都跟我形影不离(除了晚上睡觉和洗澡)，我在柜台的兄弟姐妹们都很羡慕我，谁叫我漂亮又实用呢!(自恋)
　　呵，看到没，小主人又在看我!这可见证了我的用处，不止这些——小主人的朋友看到了我说：“哇，好漂亮的手表!”嘿嘿，怎么样，我没骗你吧?
　　现在，你就向我介绍你吧!

作者: 龙龙他妈 时间: 2013-6-24 16:52
赞一个，写得真棒，谢谢老师分享！

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作者: 明天微笑~ 时间: 2013-6-26 13:38
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