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标题: Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it [打印本页]

作者: 西西公主    时间: 2012-4-7 09:36
标题: Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it
               
      


        There is a proverb saying:"Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.” It’s important for us to try our best to do everything that we want to do.Why do I think this?
     Let me tell you a story.At the age of 14,1 made up my mind to learn how to
type.l bought a typewriter and began to practise.At the beginning,l couldn’t control my  fingers  very  well.l  typed  slowly,and sometimes I felt like giving up,but my mum said: “If you keep on practising,l know you'll succeed.”My mother encouraged me by telling me the proverb.l kept on practising and made good use of my free time.At last,I was able to type quickly.
     We can come up against lots of problems when we are studying.We should try
out new ideas,no matter how hard it is and no matter how difficult something seems.lf
we work hard and never give up,we can always solve our problems.
     During our lifetime,we can keel trying out different ideas until we get what we want.A person who  has one  idea  and makes it works is much better than a per-
son who has a thousand ideas but doesn't do anything about them.We should remem-
ber “Nothing is difficult if you put your
heart into it.”

点评:
        小作者行文流畅.无重大语法错误。“世上无难事,只怕有心人”,这一主题惯穿全文,中心明确.且有具体实例,既唤起读者的奋发精神,又让我们对作者的恒心与毅力所佩服。是一篇立志的好习作。
作者: 菜蜂    时间: 2012-4-7 10:51
我顶啊。接着顶  
作者: 快乐的老鼠    时间: 2012-4-7 10:51
强人,佩服死了。呵呵,不错啊  
作者: xuanxi    时间: 2012-4-9 09:55
家长易论坛建的不错哦
作者: zhuyumu    时间: 2012-4-18 09:00
这样的好贴需要收藏啊
作者: leonheart    时间: 2012-4-18 09:00
又看了一次  




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